Volume 5 preview pdf #4 "MTv5 feb25" proofreading

p3 [768] panel 3: you're → your
p5 [755] panel 5: neighbors → neighbor's
p7 [886] panel 3: Missing period after "yourself"
p7 [886] panel 4: Missing comma after "cameras"
p17 [957] panels 9 & 10: All text there should probably be in brackets. < > (Fanboy and Kimiko, and Piro speaking to Kimiko)
p20 [961] panel 10: art continuity error? Largo's necklace isn't there.
p20 [961] panel 10: open/close quote marks used instead of the identical "straight" quotes normally used.
p22 [963] panel 9: extra space inbetween question mark and closing bracket.
p24 [965] panel 7: Thats → That's

Volume 5 preview pdf #5 "MTv5 index feb27" proofreading

pg16 [754] panel 8: extra space in between "here  before"
pg17 [755] panel 5: neighbors → neighbor's     ...and this page is in the wrong place.
pg22 [763] There's still time to switch out "pep talk" for "horrible realisation"
pg36 [777] panel 1 & 6: "I" capitalized inconsistently, two of them are still lowercase. (No, i think... & i see spots...)
pg45 [786] panel 3: Question mark should be outside the quote marks since he is questioning a quotation, not quoting a question.
pg51 [793] panels 2,5: Some of the background chatter here is over some dark background bits too, like [783] was before.
pg57 [799] panel 2: That D in worked is running up against the other speech bubble. It's because you moved Erika's bubble down compared to the web version. Now if you just nudged it a little bit to the left...
pg79 [824] panel 5: "b334" Granted, abusing the English language is part of l33t, but that usually shows up as "b33r". I don't know if that was a typo or not.
pg81 [826] panel 3: Hyphen in "Sonoda-san" is after the line break. That's probably not proper, it certainly isn't typical. Should be room enough on the other line to move it up.
pg85 [831] panel 2: Some of the background chatter here is over some dark background bits too, like [783] was before, though not as bad.
pg138 [902] panel 6: Extra space in between "I'm  sorry"
pg149 [915] panel 6: Maybe a comma after "screw it up"
* Here's what I mean about how some of the later strips use different quote marks: Not a big deal really though. I'm just anal.
pg187 [954] the lines on the jagged triangles protrude into the oval for the "over the phone" voice bubbles. In previous "over the phone" voice bubbles they don't. Just me being anal again.
pg190 [957] panels 9 & 10: All text there should probably be in brackets. < > (Fanboy and Kimiko, and Piro speaking to Kimiko)

Volume 5 Freetalk proofreading, #1

page 2 line 41: wondering, "Who are you, and what have you do with Fred?"
page 3 lines 6 & 21: It seems that "OK" is typically capitalized, but is one of those things that seems to depend more on personal preference than a hard and fast rule.
page 3 line 27: "Readers Guide" - "Readers" should probably be possessive, though as the singular "Reader's" or the plural "Readers'" seems to be a matter of opinion. A google search turns up about equal numbers of both

Volume 5 Freetalk proofreading, #2

SGD section, pg 4 line 22: "but when it goes too far"
pg 4, line 26: "I don't think  there are too many" extra space between "think there"
pg 4 line 36: Dom said he doesn't use his trackball anymore.

Volume 5 preview pdf #6 "mar01 updated pages" proofreading

[902] panel 6: Extra space in between "I'm  sorry"
[947] panel 1: niether → neither
[947] panel 4: elipsis needs third dot
[951] panel 4: it's → its
[954] panel 1: Sonoda's → Sonodas'
[965] panel 7: Thats → That's

Volume 5 Readers' Guide Freetalk proofreading

Don't forget the apostrophe!
- P226 - Intro to the Readers Guide
...for a long time is a decent Readers Guide.

"I'll finish this section when I feel like it"
With eight chapters, five books...

Revised Synopsis for books @ backpackit proofreading

colored by their unique and contrasting perceptions of the Tokyo
Schoolgirls, ninjas, robots
Ping also joins the class, and is immediately befriended by Miho, who notices that she is a game accessory.
sends Junpei to bring Largo  back to teach his class. <- extra space in there
Ed, whose mission it is to return Ping to the Sony labs,
Largo cleverly uses Ping's strength to fend him off, which impresses the inspector, who hires him to be a Special Contract Operative
Piro gives Kimiko a drawing he had done of Kotone, one of his favorite characters.. (double period)
it backfires as Largo tells her that he refuses to play that game and leaves
blindly follows Ping to the Cave of Evil nightclub which Miho has invited
Kimiko's publicity appearance on the radio show doesn't go well after she scolds the hosts for badmouthing fans.
constantly tearing himself down hurts the people who care about him. (missing period)
Expanded version available in the Megatokyo Volume 4 book. of the original online version.

Readers' Guide Character page 1-4 proofreading

Largo section: at Shiritsu Daitou High School where he is known by students as "Great Teacher Largo."
Largo section: TPCD Special Contract Operative . ← space between Operative and the period.
Kimiko section: "Kotone" in the much anticipated game "Sight."
Kimiko section: a deep sadness and inner turmoil.
Erika section: possible extra space in "where she  worked in obscurity"
Yuki section: posssible extra space in "she has  magical girl abilities."

Miho section: has missed much due to unexplained illnesses.
Miho section: Member of Largo's class,. &larr comma or period, but not both.
Dom section: the sokuon (small tsu) is in hiragana but the do and mu are in katakana.
Dom section: by Largo to send money . ← space between money and the period.
Ed section: Frequent user of the comprehensive Sony medical plan.
Junpei section: Should his name written in Japanese be using hiragana instead of katakana?

Mami section: diary of her and her friends' lives. &larr apostrophe
Asako section: Mami and Yuki can always count on her to be there for them no matter what.

Matsui section: possible extra space in "currently producing  the long awaited game"
Matsui section: exasperated with Kimiko's approach
Tsubasa section: Rumored to have some connection
Yuuji section: numerous level 5+obsession fan groups. ← There at least should be a space after 5+. Perhaps "obsession level 5+" is more clear than "level 5+ obsession", it was originally phrased in [593] as "obsession level 5 fan groups"
Suggest you move Junko's entry to above Niidera or below Matsui, rather than having her in the middle of three people who are thematically related.

Readers' Guide proofreading

page 1, Chapter 2 section: "beergarden" shouldn't be capitalized.
page 2, Chapter 4 section: Need a space in "Yuki’sbrother"
page 2, Chapter 6 section: "At first refusing his help, he follows her..." - this isn't good, the object of the sentence is "he" for Largo, meaning Largo refuses his own help. Better to move it to the previous sentence where it is more chronologically accurate anyway, i.e. "Though she refuses his help at first, Largo convinces Erika that she can..."
page 3, Presence section: Technically, it is illustrated. It has pictures. It's just not a comic.
page 3, timeline section: Day 1: that period needs to be removed, it's the only line where one is used (that was my fault)
page 3, timeline section, Day 53/Chap 1: I decided this needs to mention at least one more thing that happened: Largo becomes a teacher, Kimiko delivers dinner [comics 134-192]
page 3, timeline section, Day 59/Chap 7: "Fanboy mobs at Anna Miller's" - it looks like you took out "the store and" for the sake of space, which is fine, but then it needs to be "mob" not "mobs."
page 5, Miho section: "Dark, Mysterious, Student at Shiritsu Daitou High School," - "mysterious" and "student" shouldn't be capitalized, remove the comma after "mysterious." → Dark, mysterious student at Shiritsu Daitou High School,
page 6, Meimi section: extra space in "she  secretly"
page 6, Yuuji section: "devices his sister Yuki seems to mysteriously aquires on a regular basis." acquire not acquires
page 7, Tsubasa section: "Rumored to have some connection..."
page 7, Junko section: "also rumored that to practice enjo kosai," - remove "that"
page 7, Megumi section: "grandmother" shouldn't be capitalized.
page 7, Matsui section: "often exasperated with Kimiko's approach"
page 7, Sayuri section: possible extra space in "for Kimiko"
page 8, "Art Suplies" → "Art Supplies"
page 8, "and we have had been serving Megatokyo fans since 2004." - remove "had"