Update Jan 10 2014 - final version (hopefully)
Suggestions to improve continuity things
Other suggestions
Need to fix, etc. special Fred list
(also there may be a couple places where DH may need to consult you on wording where the dialogue needs correcting)
| Online comic # |
Online errors, typos, etc. | Changes in book | Book # - page # |
| [1] | There's no MT logo or chapter title | same | 1-11 |
| [79] | fixed! | 1-76 | |
| [90] | panel 1, 2, 4: art Largo's shirt here had punctuation when it appeared in [37] |
same | 1-82 |
| [106] | panel 3: art where's Ping's chin/cheek plate thing? | same | 1-94 |
| [108] | panel 4: I suggest adding a line for Piro "Huh?" or something to make it not weird that Kimiko essentially repeats herself in [110] | same | 1-96 |
| [116] | panels 1 & 5: art Largo's shirt is kinda different from the one he's wearing the rest of the chapter and there's not an opportunity for him to change after this page | same | 1-112 |
| [128] | art other than panel 1, Ping seems to be missing her cheek plate thing | same | 1-119 |
| [140] | panel 5: art Erika's six fingered hand | same | 2-13 |
| [150] | panel 8: art fix Yuki's buttons, probably just cut out and flip the mirror reflection | same | 2-16 |
| [161] | panel 11: art Asako & Mami's hair and scarves not hatched | same | 2-22 |
| [172] | panel 6: is it okay for l33t d00d to suddenly speak normally? maybe use just a little l33t? | same | 2-31 |
| [199] | panel 8: art Piro's glasses missing | same | 2-51 |
| [202] | fixed! | 2-53 | |
| [207] | panels 1 & 3: art The only place in the first three books where this door swings the wrong way. | same | 2-57 |
| [212] | panels 2, 3, 5, 6: art change "2-1" to "2-C" | same | 2-59 |
| [226] | panel 3: I assume Miho is intentionally speaking Japanese over Largo's head here? | 2-68 | |
| [234] | panel 5: art Asmodeus not hatched | same | 2-74 |
| [316] | panel 1: "post-it note" added new error needs to say "people who deal with kids". Although of course now you ARE one of them anyway. Maybe a new post-it should be added? | 3-176 | |
| [321] | panel 1: repetition of "Is l33t master here?" from the last panel of the previous page wrecks the flow in print. Consider cutting it and moving some dialouge from panel 2 into panel 1 | same | 3-18 |
| [367] | panel 3: art balloon tail to phone is different from what is used later (see [390],[511-513]) | same | 3-52 |
| [402] | panel 4: big megatokyo logo removed rather than updated, put the logo back | 3-79 | |
| [407] | panel 1: "post-it note" added though at this point what you wrote on there is no longer true | 3-198 | |
| [412] | panel 5: art Miho's bell is missing | same | 3-86 |
| [421] | panels 4,5,7: Is there a reason Junpei is speaking English? Everyone else is speaking Japanese other than a single sentence of Dom's. The last panel seems especially odd. | same | 3-95 |
| [458] | all panels: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) | 3-123 | |
| [464] | all panels: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) | 3-129 | |
| [466] | panel 6: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) | 3-131 | |
| [486] | panels 2 & 7: art Piro's forehead cut missing panel 7: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) |
same |
3-146 |
| [487] | panels 2, 3 & 4: art Piro's forehead cut missing | same | 3-147 |
| [488] | panels 2, 4 & 6: art Piro's forehead cut missing | same | 3-148 |
| [492] | panels 5 & 6: art Piro's forehead cut missing panels 1 & 7: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) |
same |
3-151 |
| [493] | panels 1 & 6: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) | 3-152 | |
| [496] | panels 1 & 6: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) | 3-153 | |
| [497] | panel 5: art Piro's glasses are missing (okay, and the cut on his forehead, but he's far in the background so you probably couldn't see it anyway) | same | 3-154 |
| [501] | panels 4 & 5: art Piro's forehead cut missing | same | 3-157 |
| [505] | panels 2 & 4: art Piro's forehead cut missing | same | 3-160 |
| [506] | panels 6: art Piro's forehead cut missing | same | 3-161 |
Need to fix, etc.
| Online comic # |
Online errors, typos, etc. | Changes in book | Book # - page # |
| [1] | There's no MT logo or chapter title |
same caption: only one space between sentences (x1) |
1-11 |
| [2] | panel 2: put Sega in italics panel 2: only one space between sentences (x2) (Dom) panel 3: extra space in "life been" panel 4: put Neverquest in italics panel 4: "but" doesn't make sense in context, should just be a new sentence there |
fixed! same same fixed! same |
1-12 |
| [3] | panel 1: put Sega in italics | fixed! | 1-13 |
| [4] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x3) (Piro) panel 2: put Bioware in italics panel 2: needs period on Piro's last sentence |
same fixed! same |
1-14 |
| [5] | |
caption: RPG'S → RPGS caption: move period outside quotes |
1-15 |
| [6] | panels 1 & 2: Ion Storm is two words panels 1 & 2: put Ion Storm in italics panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (staff guy) panel 2: suggest a comma after "yes" panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 4: needs period on Largo's last sentence |
same fixed! same same same same |
1-16 |
| [7] | panel 3: single quotes → double quotes |
same panel 3: period moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside |
1-17 |
| [8] | panel 1: period needed at end of Piro's last sentence panel 2: yea → yeah panel 2: suggest comma after "at all" panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Largo, Piro) panel 3: suggest comma after "Ah, Largo" panel 4: period needed on Piro's sentence |
same fixed! same same same panel 3: ellipsis changed to period fixed! |
1-18 |
| [9] | all: the font changes for the l33t speak here, but never again, so use the normal font panel 2: only one space between sentences (x2) (stewardess) panel 2: all right is two words, alright (one L) seems to be commonly used but is considered improper panel 2: "get" l33tified as g47z? or should be g37z? panel 4: Period needed on Largo's sentence |
same same same same fixed! caption: single quotes → double quotes caption: move period outside quotes |
1-19 |
| [10] | panel 2: period needed on second guard's sentence panel 3: suggest comma after "combat" |
same same |
1-20 |
| [11] | panel 1: period needed on Largo's last sentence panel 1: period needed on Piro's last sentence panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 2: period needed on clerk's sentence panel 2: period needed on Piro's last sentence panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same same same fixed! fixed! same |
1-21 |
| [12] | panels 1, 2 & 3: put Baldur's Gate 2, With You Mitsumeteitai, and Neverwinter Nights in italics, no quotes panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 1: Baldurs → Baldur's panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 3: period needed on Piro's last sentence |
same same same same same same |
1-22 |
| [13] | panel 2: move exclamation points outside quotes panel 3: move period outside quotes panel 3: put Nadesico in italics, no quotes |
same same same caption: put Martian Succesor Nadesico in italics, no quotes |
1-23 |
| [14] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 3: yea → yeah panel 4: yea → yeah |
same fixed! missing period added fixed! |
1-24 |
| [15] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 3: A AMD → An AMD panel 3: put AMD Athlon in italics panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 4: put Athlon in italics panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same fixed! fixed! same same panel 4: ellipsis changed to period same |
1-25 |
| [16] | panel 2: missing period on Tsubasa's last sentence panel 2: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro, Largo) panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Tsubasa) panels 2 & 4: put Air and Excel Sage in italics, no quotes |
fixed! same same same same |
1-26 |
| [17] | panels 2 & 4: put Marvel Vs. Capcom 2 and Capcom Vs. SNK in italics | fixed! | 1-27 |
| [18] | panel 3: suggest comma after "to Japan" panel 3&4: the Tokyo Game Show sign clearly establishes the date, something we may not really want to have |
same same |
1-28 |
| [19] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 2: its → it's panel 2: need comma after "LAN parties" panel 3: yea → yeah panel 4: yea → yeah all panels: the Tokyo Game Show sign clearly establishes the year, something we may not really want to have |
panel 1: ellipsis changed to period panel 2: comma after "here we are" removed same same same fixed! fixed! same |
1-29 |
| [20] | panels 1 & 2: put Konami, Metal Gear Solid 2, Metal Gear, and Metal Gear Solid 2 in italics, no quotes panels 2 & 4: remove quotes on Solid Snake and MacGyver panel 4: needs question mark on Piro's second sentence |
same (only Komani fixed) same same |
1-30 |
| [21] | panel 1: put Sentimental Graffiti 2 Special in italics panel 3: two dot ellipsis panel 4: two dot ellipsis panel 4: needs period on Largo's last sentence |
fixed! fixed! same same |
1-31 |
| [22] | panel 4: put Air in italics, no quotes | same | 1-32 |
| [23] | 1-33 | ||
| [24] | panel 2: yea → yeah panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x2) (Erika) panel 4: lets → let's |
fixed! same same same |
1-34 |
| [25] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panels 2 & 3: put Pia Carrot 2.5 Super DX and SNK in italics panel 3: (sigh) → *sigh* |
same fixed! same panel 3: ellipsis changed to period |
1-35 |
| [26] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Tsubasa) panel 2: suggest comma after "quick" panel 2: needs period on Tsubasa's last sentence panel 3: only one space between sentences (x3) (Largo, Tsubasa) panel 4: suggest comma after "bras" panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same same same same same same |
1-36 |
| [27] | yea → yeah |
same caption: put Anna Miller's in italics, no quotes; DPD'S → DPDS |
1-133 |
| [28] | panel 2: needs period on Megumi's sentence panel 2: put Denny's in italics, no quotes panels 2 & 3: put Anna Miller's in italics panel 4: two dot ellipsis |
fixed! same fixed! same |
1-37 |
| [29] | panel 2: wha'dya → whaddya panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) |
same same |
1-38 |
| [30] | panel 2: put Daily Radar in italics, no quotes panel 3: needs period on Largo's sentence |
fixed! same fixed! panel 4: "by here" changed to "over there" |
1-123 |
| [31] | 1-99 | ||
| [32] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 2: needs period on Megumi's last sentence |
same fixed! same |
1-39 |
| [33] | panel 1: put Playstation 2 in italics |
fixed! panel 4: one hyphen changed to two but it should be a single dash cpation: put Playstation 2 in italics |
1-124 |
| [34] | panel 2: extra space in "is not" | same | 1-40 |
| [35] | panel 1: needs period on Tsubasa's sentence panel 1: odd line spacing in Piro's first balloon |
fixed! but move it outside the quotes same |
1-41 |
| [36] | panel 3: needs period on Largo's last sentence panel 3: yea → yeah panel 3: suggest comma after Dead or Alive Hardcore panel 3: put Playstation 2 and Dead or Alive Hardcore in italics, no quotes panel 4: only one space between sentences (x2) (Largo) panel 4: you use astrisks for emphasis so rarely, perhaps bold would be better? (though would that be hard to see here?) |
same same same same same same |
1-42 |
| [37] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Tsubasa) panel 1: needs period on Tsubasa's last sentence panel 3: extra space in "days, promise." |
same same same |
1-43 |
| [38] | panel 1: needs period or comma after second "I know" panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Tsubasa) panel 4: whadya → whaddya |
same panel 1: spaces removed in ellipsis same same panel 4: ellipsis changed to period caption: move period outside quotes |
1-44 |
| [39] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro, Seraphim) | same | 1-45 |
| [40] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x2) (Dom) panel 2: put Sega's in italics |
same fixed! |
1-46 |
| [41] | panel 2: lets → let's | same | 1-47 |
| [42] | panel 2: put Meth for Dummies in italics, no quotes panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1 or x3) (Piro) panel 2: extra space in "It's illegal" panel 4: yea → yeah panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same same same same |
1-48 |
| [43] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same caption: move comma and period outside quotes |
1-49 |
| [44] | panel 1: extra space in "her mother" panel 1: (sigh) → *sigh* panel 2: put Magical Stuffed Kami-chan in italics panel 3: missing period on "jr" panel 3: yea → yeah panel 4: extra space in "she's been" panel 4: needs period on Yuki's sentence, outside the quotes panel 4: single quotes → double quotes |
same same fixed! fixed! same same same fixed! |
1-50 |
| [45] | panel 2: needs period on the sentence | ||
| [46] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro) panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Yuki, Piro) |
same same caption: single quotes → double quotes |
1-51 |
| [47] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 3: as far as I can tell, "penny loafers" does not need hyphenation panel 3: move comma from after "floppy socks" to after "penny loafers" panel 3: (Ahem)... → *Ahem* |
panel 1: ellipsis changed to period same same same same |
1-52 |
| [48] | panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 3: extra space in "spending Dom" |
fixed! same caption: single quotes → double quotes |
1-53 |
| [49] | panel 2: extra spaces in "can't even" and "to find" panel 2: only one space between sentences (x2) (Seraphim) |
same same |
1-54 |
| [50] | panel 1: extra space in "I just" panel 1: put 3D Realms and Duke Nukem Forever in italics, no quotes panel 4: single quotes → double quotes (scare quotes okay, it's not the actual company name) |
same one fixed, the other not fixed! |
1-125 |
| [51] | panel 1: lets → let's | same | 1-55 |
| [52] | panel 2: remove period after "game" panel 2: put Napple Tale in italics, no quotes panel 2: playin → playin' panel 3: put Candyland in italics panel 3: isnt → isn't panel 4: yea → yeah panel 4: not like you to have a white box around a sound effect |
panel 1: ellipsis changed to period same same fixed! fixed! same same same |
1-56 |
| [53] | panel 1: wearin → wearin' panel 3: needs period on the sentence |
same same caption: put Excel Saga in italics, no quotes |
1-57 |
| [54] | panel 1: thru → through panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) panel 2: "I wonder who he is" period not question mark panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) panel 3: thru → through panel 3: "my Dad" in this instance could read just "Dad" panel 3: yea → yeah panel 4: maybe a comma after "If they saw this" |
same same same same same same same same |
1-58 |
| [55] | panel 2: yea → yeah panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro) |
same same |
1-59 |
| [56] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) panel 2: put Dreamcast in italics panel 4: single quotes → double quotes x2 |
same same one fixed!, the other not caption: put Saint Tail in italics, no quotes |
1-60 |
| [57] | panel 1: needs period on Largo's sentence panel 1: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: needs period on Tycho's sentence |
same fixed! same caption: put Penny Arcade and The Bench in italics, move comma outside quotes on "fan appreciation bat" |
1-126 |
| [58] | panel 2: needs periods on Seraphim's second and third sentences. | ||
| [59] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Junpei) panel 1: needs period on Junpei's last sentence |
same fixed! |
1-61 |
| [60] | panel 1: wearin → wearin' panel 4: lets → let's |
||
| [61] | panel 1: extra space in "gonna find" panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same |
1-62 |
| [62] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 2: missing closing bracket > |
same same |
1-63 |
| [63] | 1-64 | ||
| [64] | 1-65 | ||
| [65] | panel 2: needs period after please |
panel 2: "(P.S.: Don't hurt me, please)" removed panel 4: -- changed to ... |
1-100 |
| [66] | panels 1 & 3: put Bioware's and Neverwinter Nights in italics, no quotes panel 3 & 4: single quotes → double quotes |
one fixed, other two not fixed! caption: put Neverwinter Nights in italics, no quotes |
1-127 |
| [67] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 4: single quotes → double quotes |
same fixed! same same new error panel 4: page number "66" on Piro's ear caption: move period and comma outside quotes; put Quarter Iceshop in italics, no quotes |
1-66 |
| [68] | 1-67 | ||
| [69] |
panels 1 & 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 2: you use astrisks for emphasis so rarely, perhaps bold would be better? panel 4: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: needs period on Sarah's last sentence |
panel 1: comma moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside fixed! same same fixed! |
1-68 |
| [70] | panel 1: it's → its panel 2: yea → yeah panel 2: only one space between sentences (x2) (Largo) |
same same same |
1-69 |
| [71] | panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) | same | 1-70 |
| [72] | panel 2: needs period on Kimiko's first sentence panels 2 & 3 & 4: single quotes → double quotes |
fixed! but move it outside the quotes fixed! panel 4: period moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside (x2) |
1-71 |
| [73] | 1-72 | ||
| [74] | caption: put Quake 3 in italics | 1-73 | |
| [75] | panel 2: yea → yeah panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asako) panel 2: single quotes → double quotes (x2) panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asako) panel 3: single quotes → double quotes panel 3: you use astrisks for emphasis so rarely, perhaps bold would be better? (though would that be hard to see here?) |
same same one fixed the other not same fixed! same |
1-74 |
| [76] | |||
| [77] | panel 2: thru → through panel 4: put Temptation Island in italics, no quotes panel 4: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: needs period on Seraphims's last sentence |
same same same fixed! |
1-75 |
| [78] | |||
| [79] | panel 1 & 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seraphim) panel 2: viola → voila or voilà panel 3: four dot ellipsis panel 3: art Boo's rat tail panel 4: question mark should be outside quotes |
fixed! same changed to violá, still wrong same fixed! same |
1-76 |
| [80] | panel 2: text re-arranged, period after "damn" changed to a comma panel 4: text re-arranged, period changed to question mark and ellipsis changed to period |
1-77 | |
| [81] | panel 1: needs period on Largo's last sentence |
fixed! panel 4: period changed to comma in Piro's lines |
1-128 |
| [82] | panel 2: "us for" removed from "supposed to be drawing us for the next strip" | 1-101 | |
| [83] | |||
| [84] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asako) panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) panel 3: single quotes → double quotes |
same same fixed! |
1-78 |
| [85] | panel 2 yea → yeah panel 4: could use a comma after "dresser" |
same same |
1-129 |
| [86] | panel 1: put Dance Dance Revolution in italics, no quotes |
same panel 1: "the/that arcade sensation" moved within the sentence |
1-102 |
| [87] | panel 1: <sigh...> → *sigh* panel 2: yea → yeah panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same fixed! panel 4: ellipsis changed to period same |
1-79 |
| [88] | panel 4: (sigh) → *sigh* panel 6: dammnit → damn it or dammit | same same |
1-80 |
| [89] | 1-81 | ||
| [90] | panel 1, 2, 4: art Largo's shirt here had punctuation when it appeared in [37] panel 2: maybe a comma after "You got it" panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same same same |
1-82 |
| [91] | panel 3: yea → yeah panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) |
same same same caption: put MegaGamers in italics, no quotes |
1-83 |
| [92] | panel 1: put MegaGamers in italics | fixed! | 1-84 |
| [93] | panels 1 & 3: two hyphens reduced to one panel 3: "or we walk" moved within the sentence panel 4: period added to "This is Dom" though not to "Ed is over here and can't even mumble" |
1-103 | |
| [94] | panel 1: duplicate word "thousands of of people" panel 1: goin → goin' |
same same |
1-85 |
| [95] | panel 1: two dot ellipsis | same | 1-134 |
| [96] | panel 3: put Daikatana in italics, no quotes panel 4: yea → yeah |
same same |
1-86 |
| [97] | 1-135 | ||
| [98] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) panel 3: extra space in "give him" |
same same |
1-87 |
| [99] | 1-88 | ||
| [100] | 1-89 | ||
| [101] | panel 1: change period after "we need guns" to comma | fixed! | 1-90 |
| [102] | panel 1: (sigh...) → *sigh* | same | 1-91 |
| [103] | 1-92 | ||
| [104] | |||
| [105] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Tsubasa) panel 2: only one space between sentences (x2) (Tsubasa) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x5) (Piro, Tsubasa, Largo) panel 4: missing > on Piro's bubble ; I assume Tsubasa intentionally switched to English? |
same same same same |
1-93 |
| [106] | panel 1: put Playstation 2 in italics panel 2: put Emotional Doll System it italics panel 2: EDS → E.D.S. panel 3: EDS → E.D.S. panel 3: art where's Ping's chin/cheek plate thing? panel 3: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: put Princess Maker in italics, no quotes |
same fixed! same new error panel 2: extra closing bracket >> same same fixed! same panel 4: hyphen changed to double hyphen but it should be a single dash |
1-94 |
| [107] | 1-95 | ||
| [108] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 4: should be comma after "anything" panel 4: I suggest adding a line for Piro "Huh?" or something to make it not weird that Kimiko essentially repeats herself in [110] |
same same same |
1-96 |
| [109] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes panel 2: single quotes → double quotes (x2) panel 3: you use astrisks for emphasis so rarely, perhaps bold would be better? |
fixed! same same panel 4: ellipsis changed to period |
1-97 |
| [110] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 4: why two "rip" sound fx? panel 6: get's → gets |
same same same |
1-106 |
| [111] | panel 1: (sigh...) → *sigh* panel 2: sound fx text needs white outline for visibility panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seraphim) panel 4: oogling → ogling panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seraphim) |
same same same same same |
1-107 |
| [112] | panel 5: put NHL 2K in italics |
panel 3: ellipsis changed to period fixed! new error panel 5: I think "season" shouldn't be italicized |
1-108 |
| [113] | panel 1: ellipsis and comma redundant to each other panel 7: put Cave of Evil in italics (the quotes can stay) |
panel 1: "Ah... nigechatta." and footnote replaced with " panel 3: "Ah," removed same |
1-109 |
| [114] | panel 5: maybe a comma after "thank you" panel 7: needs period on Yangisawa's sentence |
same same |
1-110 |
| [115] | 1-111 | ||
| [116] | panels 1 & 5: art Largo's shirt is kinda different from the one he's wearing the rest of the chapter and there's not an opportunity for him to change after this page panel 3: open bracket < shouldn't be there panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Miho) panel 6: only one space between sentences (x2) (Kenji, Miho) |
same fixed! same same |
1-112 |
| [117] | |||
| [118] | 1-136 | ||
| [119] | panel 2: get's → gets | same | 1-130 |
| [120] | |||
| [121] | panel 4: put Bioware in italics | fixed! | 1-113 |
| [122] | panel 2: single quotes → double quotes for "adjustments" panel 2: put Office Space in italics, no quotes panel 2: needs periods on both sentences (outside the quotes) panel 3: single quotes → double quotes panel 3: commin → commin' panel 5: put The Mummy Returns in italics, no quotes panel 6: single quotes → double quotes panel 6: needs period on Sarah's sentence (outside the quotes) |
same same same fixed! same same fixed! same |
1-132 |
| [123] | panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) panel 5: needs comma or period after "tomorrow" panel 5: two dot ellipsis |
fixed! same same same |
1-114 |
| [124] | panel 2: 'l33t → l33t panel 4: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: kickin → kickin' panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Junpei) panel 8: extra space in "block! !" |
same fixed! same same fixed! |
1-115 |
| [125] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 2: put Cubesoft in italics x2 panel 2: proper syllable breaks are con·grat·u·la·tions |
same fixed! same panel 2: ellipsis changed to period |
1-116 |
| [126] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 2: L33tmaster → L33t Master panel 2: Sigh... &rarr *sigh* panel 3: jeeze is usually spelled jeez or geez |
same same same same |
1-117 |
| [127] | 1-118 | ||
| [128] | panel 2: yea → yeah panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panels 4 & 5: Piro and Tsubasa not capitalized even though Largo and Ping are panel 6: single quotes → double quotes panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 9: proper syllable breaks are ac·tu·al·ly panel 9: exclamation mark should be outside the quotes art other than panel 1, Ping seems to be missing her cheek plate thing |
same same same fixed! same same same same |
1-119 |
| [129] | panel 1: goin → goin' panel 2: timeline fix: "several months" is too long for what is actually just over seven weeks, change to "several weeks" or "almost/nearly two months" panel 2: i → I ("where and when i deem fit") panel 2: capitalize "conscience operative, level 9" (see [395]) panel 2: four dot ellipsis panel 2: take the year off "seraphim-resume" |
same same same same same same panel 2: "chapter end" text removed but needs to be put back in as "End Chapter 0" |
1-120 |
| [130] | panel 6: S D Nakor uru → SD Nakoruru |
same new errors panel 8: period removed from "won't happen very often", period added to "Largo's bed", and comma after "Go to sleep" changed to period |
1-104 |
| [131] | panel 3: needs period on sentence panel 5: two dot ellipsis panel 6: needs period on Piro's sentence panel 6: only one space between sentences (x2) (Largo) panel 6: put Guinness in italics |
same same same same same |
1-131 |
| [132] | panel 3: extra spaces in "look at" and "scene, but" panels 4 & 5: 11 item labels no punctuation, 4 item labels with periods - better off without the periods I think panel 6: single quotes → double quotes panel 7: lets → let's (Dom) |
same same fixed! same |
1-121 |
| [133] | panel 1: lets → let's panel 1: needs comma after "episodes" panel 5: Armini → Armani panel 6: extra space in "laptop, frilly" |
same same same same |
1-122 |
| [134] | logo changed to the modern one | 2-9 | |
| [135] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Erika) panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Erika) panel 2: timeline fix: "You bring it up at least once a week." it's been four days since railcard. Change to "You've brought it up every day since." or similar panel 3: extra space in "don't want" panel 3: "It's also _ waste of money." ← insert "a" panel 4: extra space(s) in "fantasy. Keep" |
same same same same same panel 4: exclamation point added after "pretty girl" fixed! |
2-10 |
| [136] | |||
| [137] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x2) (Largo) panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same |
2-11 |
| [138] | panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 6: two dot ellipsis panel 7: why is E.D.S. bolded? panel 7: extra space in "units deal" panel 7: single quotes → double quotes |
same same same same same same panel 7: "I think she can." changed to "I think they can." |
2-12 |
| [139] | "post-it notes" added (will need to change "p.135") | 2-150 | |
| [140] | panel 5: art Erika's six fingered hand | same | 2-13 |
| [141] | panel 7: needs period after "aura" panel 8: needs period on Largo's last sentence |
new error panel 4: it's → its same fixed! |
2-14 |
| [142] | |||
| [143] | |||
| [144] | |||
| [145] | |||
| [146] | |||
| [147] | |||
| [148] | panel 2: put Blair Witch in italics, no quotes panel 4: Needs period after "getting late" panel 4: extra space in "it back" panel 4: needs period on Sarah's first sentence panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 6: only one space between sentences (x2) (Sarah) panel 6: yea → yeah panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Sarah) panel 8: Heloooo!! → Hellooo!! panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (ranger) panel 9: only one space between sentences (x1) (ranger) |
same fixed! same fixed! same same same same same same same |
2-135 |
| [149] | panel 6: put Miami Vice in italics, no quotes | same | 2-15 |
| [150] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Meimi) panel 8: art fix Yuki's buttons, probably just cut out and flip the mirror reflection panel 9: move period outside quotes |
same same same |
2-16 |
| [151] | panel 8: put Quake in italics panel 9: only one space between sentences (x1) (school staff lady) |
same same |
2-17 |
| [152] | 2-152 | ||
| [153] | 2-18 | ||
| [154] | panels 2 & 10: not sure how the rules apply here, Ping's two instances of "Largo-sensei" don't have brackets but technically that works with or without panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 10: only one space between sentences (x1) (student) |
panel 10: however, in the book the brackets were added for the second "Largo-sensei" same same same |
2-19 |
| [155] | panel 3: timeline fix: "a few weeks ago" → "a few days ago"/"five days ago"/"last week" | same | 2-20 |
| [156] | |||
| [157] | |||
| [158] | (uncolored lineart version) with "post-it note" added | 2-170 | |
| [159] | |||
| [160] | panel 3: somethin → somethin' panel 3: tho → though panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 5: extra space in "Eheheheh, oh" panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) panel 7: skippin → skippin' |
same fixed! same same same panel 6: ellipsis changed to double hyphen but it should be a single dash same |
2-21 |
| [161] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Mami) panel 3: needs comma or period after "anything" panel 11: art Asako & Mami's hair and scarves not hatched panel 12: lets → let's |
same same same same |
2-22 |
| [162] | 2-23 | ||
| [163] | panel 3: extra space in "for. The" (three instead of two) panel 5: missing comma after "squeek" (#2) panel 10: proper syllable breaks are quar·ters |
same same same |
2-24 |
| [164] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 2: proper syllable breaks are in·ter·est·ing panel 6: two dot ellipsis panel 8: EDS → E.D.S. |
same same same panel 8: changed "rumours" (Brit spelling) to "rumors" same panel 9: "little brother, you know..." changed to "whiny little brother." |
2-25 |
| [165] | panel 3: extra space in "if you" panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asako) panel 6: Should "Where do you get these stupid ideas" end in a question mark? panel 8: single quotes → double quotes panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Mami) |
same panel 5: double quotes changed to single quotes but should change them back same same fixed! same |
2-26 |
| [166] | panel 7: single quotes → double quotes panel 9: only one space between sentences (x2) (Largo, Miho) |
panel 2: comma changed to period fixed! panel 7: ellipsis changed to period same |
2-27 |
| [167] | panel 5: "...anyone" changed to "anyone..." | 2-28 | |
| [168] | 2-137 | ||
| [169] | panel 1: thru → through panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 6: only one space between sentences (x3) (l33t d00d, subtitle) panel 6: needs period on the subtitle's last sentence panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (l33t d00d) |
panel 1: changed "it's" to "it is" same same panels 5-7: changed font in subtitles same same new error panel 7: "5@v3d" became "5@" same |
2-29 |
| [170] | panel 2: double hyphen should be single dash panel 8: "myart" → "my art" panel 8: needs period on Piro's last sentence panel 10: needs period on Dom's fourth sentence |
same same fixed! panel 9: period moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside fixed! but move it outside the quotes new error panel 10: now missing period on Dom's final sentence |
2-125 & 126 |
| [171] | panel 5: "mess with it" → "mess with them" panel 6: extra space in "out enough" panel 8: proper syllable breaks are res·tau·rant |
fixed! same panel 7: ellipsis changed to period but we decided to move it back outside the quotes panel 8: ellipsis changed to period same |
2-30 |
| [172] | panel 1: needs periods on l33t d00d's second and third sentences panel 2: its → it's panel 3: needs period on l33t d00d's sentences panel 4: enemies → enemy's or enemies' panel 5: needs period on l33t d00d's sentence panel 6: put Mosh Mosh Revolution and Dance Dance Revolution in italics, no quotes panel 6: is it okay for l33t d00d to suddenly speak normally? maybe use just a little l33t? panel 6: yea → yeah |
same fixed! same same same same same same |
2-31 |
| [173] | panel 5: missing space in "Ready, set..." panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
fixed! panel 6: ellipsis changed to period same |
2-32 |
| [174] | panel 1: goin → goin' panel 1: put Mosh Mosh Revolution in italics panel 1: playin → playin' panel 7: yea → yeah |
same same fixed! same |
2-33 |
| [175] | panel 1: missing closing bracket > panel 1: only one space between sentences (x3) (crowd) panel 5: single quotes → double quotes panel 7: two dot ellipsis |
same same fixed! same |
2-34 |
| [176] | panel 1: its → it's | same | 2-151 |
| [177] | panel 2: extra space in "you, we" panel 2: needs period on fanboy's sentence panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (fanboys) panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (offscreen person) |
panel 1: changed ~~ to ~! same fixed! same same |
2-35 |
| [178] | panel 1: put Warmth and MegaTokyo in italics, no quotes (x2 each) |
fixed for MegaTokyo but not Warmth panel 1: font changed for warmth panel 1: tom moore changed to tom blackenmoor panel 1: ellipsis changed to period panel 1: "post-it note" added |
2-153 |
| [179] | panel 3: single quotes → double quotes panel 8: sparkin → sparkin' (maybe? it is l33t after all) panel 8: needs period on l33t d00d's sentence |
fixed! same same |
2-36 |
| [180] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 1: I think "never mind" should be two words |
same same panel 2: 3 ellipses changed to periods panel 6: 2 ellipses changed to periods |
2-37 |
| [181] | panel 1: put Cubesoft in italics panel 2: extra space in "part.>" panel 3: remove comma after "lonely" panel 3: ma'm → ma'am panel 3: needs period on Ootaka's sentence panel 4: its → it's |
same same same same same same panel 5: "they are" changed to "he's" |
2-38 |
| [182] | panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 3: "defences" is British spelling of "defenses" panel 4: only one space between sentences (x2) (Ping) panel 6: "Piro oniisan" → "Piro-niisan" panel 7: single quotes → double quotes panel 7: Thats → that's |
fixed! fixed! panel 3: ellipsis changed to period same added the hyphen, but still need to remove the second "o" fixed! panel 7: ellipsis changed to comma fixed! |
2-39 |
| [183] | panel 6: Damnit &rarr Dammit; |
panel 3: removed "Ughhh..." same |
2-40 |
| [184] | panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) | same | 2-41 |
| [185] | panel 5: needs period on Largo's last sentence | panel 5: ellipsis changed to period, resulting in only one space between sentences; final sentence fixed with ellipsis | 2-42 |
| [186] | |||
| [187] | panel 2: Kimiko quote should maybe be in <> brackets? panel 2: needs period on Kimiko's last sentence panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same fixed! same |
2-43 |
| [188] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes panel 2: missin → missin' panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 3: thats → that's panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
fixed! fixed! same same same |
2-140 |
| [189] | panel 9: needs period on Kimiko's sentence | same | 2-44 |
| [190] | panel 6: needs periods on Ed's and Dom's sentences panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Dom) panel 8: H.E.A.T. probably doesn't need to be bolded |
fixed! same same |
2-45 |
| [191] | panel 2: EDS → E.D.S. |
same panel 6: comma moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside |
2-127 |
| [192] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes x2 panel 1: uncapitalized "I" (x4) panel 4: put X-Box in italics |
fixed! same same panel 4: "chapter end" text changed |
2-46 |
| [193] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
fixed! same "post-it note" added |
2-146 |
| [194] | panels 2 & 9: single quotes → double quotes panel 2: put MegaTokyo in italics panel 6: put MegaTokyo in italics panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seraphim) |
fixed! fixed! same same |
2-47 |
| [195] | "post-it note" added | 2-154 | |
| [196] | panel 1: (sigh...) → *sigh* |
same panel 1: big megatokyo logo updated |
2-48 |
| [197] | panel 6: needs periods on Yuki's and Meimi's sentences panel 7: change "300 meter" to "15 meter" panel 8: dammnit → dammit |
new error panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuuji) new error panel 4: "Moooo." somehow became "Woooo." panel 5: "Oooh!" changed to "Ohh," and double exclamation mark reduced to one. fixed! panel 6: ellipsis changed to double hyphen but it should be a single dash panels 6 & 7: sounds effects changed panel 7: ellipsis changed to period same new error panel 7: missing closing bracket > new error panel 8: missing closing bracket > fixed! |
2-49 |
| [198] | panel 9: single quotes removed | 2-50 | |
| [199] | panel 7: (snort) → *snort* panel 8: art Piro's glasses missing |
same same |
2-51 |
| [200] | panel 1: put Bioware in italics panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Brad) panels 5 & 6: put Baldur's Gate, Neverwinter Nights, and Shattered Steel 2 in italics, no quotes |
fixed! same same same panel 6: ellipsis changed to period |
2-141 |
| [201] | panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo |
same panel 8: ellipsis changed to period same |
2-52 |
| [202] | panels 5 & 6: art Erika's mouth open when silent and closed when talking | fixed! | 2-53 |
| [203] | title "left behind" changed to "leftbehindinemptyplaces" | 2-54 | |
| [204] | panel 3: "credit, and you" changed to "credit. You" new error panel 5: its → it's |
2-55 | |
| [205] | panel 1: put Bloom County in italics panel 1: single quotes → double quotes |
panel 1: "#1" removed fixed! fixed! "post-it note" added |
2-147 |
| [206] | panel 2: extra space in "of our" panel 3: put Toshiba, Tiger, Hello Kitty in italics panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Largo) |
panel 1: ellipsis changed to comma same same same panel 7: ellipses changed to period and exclamation point new error panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
2-56 |
| [207] | panels 1 & 3: art The only place in the first three books where this door swings the wrong way.
panel 5: (sigh...) → *sigh* |
same panel 3: Piro's facial expression changed same |
2-57 |
| [208] | panel 1: (sigh...) → *sigh* panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same |
2-138 |
| [209] | |||
| [210] | "post-it note" added | 2-167 | |
| [211] | panel 2: needs period on Largo's last sentence panel 8: diggin → diggin' panel 8: thru → through |
same same same |
2-58 |
| [212] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asako) panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asako) panels 2, 3, 5, 6: art change "2-1" to "2-C" |
same same same |
2-59 |
| [213] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x3) (Brad) panel 3: needs period on Brad's last sentence panel 4: needs period on Brad's last sentence panels 3, 4, 5: put Neverwinter Nights in italics panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Brad) |
same new error panel 2: lets → let's fixed! fixed! same same |
2-60 |
| [214] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes |
fixed! panel 1: period moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside "post-it note" added |
2-142 |
| [215] | panel 5: thru → through panel 7: single quotes → double quotes |
same fixed! |
2-61 |
| [216] | panel 7: damnit → dammit | same | 2-62 |
| [217] | panel 2: extra space in "for sending" panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same |
2-63 |
| [218] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 3: extra spaces in "good, I get" panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) |
same same same |
2-64 |
| [219] | panel 3: (sigh...) → *sigh* panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) |
same same |
2-65 |
| [220] | panel 3: see panel 6 note ⇒ panel 6: put Trollfilter 9000 in italics panel 6: single quotes → double quotes |
panel 1: comma moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside panel 6: "(TM)" changed to "™". new error: The word "troll" added (why??) Note that "troll(TM)" in panel 3 is unchanged. fixed! fixed! |
2-134 |
| [221] | panel 3: put Emotional Doll System in italics, no quotes panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
panel 1: ellipsis removed, ellipsis changed to comma, question mark added to Piro's last sentence same same panel 4: ellipsis changed to exclamation point panel 6: "schooler! I have" changed to "school girl, I just have", "Uh huh," removed |
2-66 |
| [222] | "post it notes" added (that cover over some picture) (I would complain about Sight in quotes, but this is supposed to be the "handwritten notes" font, might not be worth the bother to try for italics here.) |
2-163 | |
| [223] | panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 7: move period outside quotes |
panel 2: removed first ellipsis same panel 6: ellipsis changed to comma panel 7: ellipsis changed to comma |
2-67 |
| [224] | panels 1, 2 & 3: single quotes → double quotes panels 2 & 3: put Kanon in italics, no quotes panel 3: missing period in Sarah's first sentence |
fixed! fixed! fixed! but move it outside the quotes new error "post-it note" too close to edge of page, some letters are cut off |
2-143 |
| [225] | panel 1: Piro's first sentence needs some kind of punctuation at the end, a question mark inside the quotes or a period outside the quotes. panel 2: "lame'ing" doesn't seem right. I would go with "lame-ing". ("laming" would be more technically correct but seems unclear. Examples found via google are widely varied on spelling.) |
same same |
2-133 |
| [226] | panel 3: (sigh...) → *sigh* panel 3: needs period on Miho's last sentence panel 3: I assume Miho is intentionally speaking Japanese over Largo's head here? |
same fixed! ???? |
2-68 |
| [227] | panel 5: missing period on second sentence in the small caption (after Oregon) | same | 2-128 |
| [228] | |||
| [229] | title "endgames" changed to "bleedingonmyfallenpast" | 2-69 | |
| [230] | panel 4: put Kanon in italics, no quotes | fixed! | 2-70 |
| [231] | panel 7: needs comma after "tall" |
same panel 7: dash changed to period |
2-71 |
| [232] | timeline fix: Matsui says "We're already two months into concept art and script development", but according to [351] "LockArt was working on [Sight] last year when they almost went belly up." and then "A lot of people have been looking forward to this game for a long time. Kannazuki Kotone already has a lot of fans." in [374]. It's clear that chracter art/info and storyline basics have been released to the public a long time ago. However [351] also gives us "CubeSoft bought them out a few months ago." So you need to either change "concept art and script development" to something like "production" or change "two months" to at least "a year". panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 3: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: single quotes → double quotes |
same fixed! panel 2: ellipsis changed to period fixed! same panel 4: "prototypical" changed to "stereotypical" |
2-72 |
| [233] | panel 2: remove period after question mark in Mami's first sentence panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asako) |
same same |
2-73 |
| [234] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asmodeus) panels 3 & 4 : single quotes → double quotes panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asmodeus) panel 5: art Asmodeus not hatched |
same fixed! panel 4: "Come'on" changed to "C'mon" same same |
2-74 |
| [235] | panel 1: the second "b34tdownz" is missing the "t" panel 1: not sure about "beetsudownzu", shouldn't it be "beetodownzu"? panel 2: thru → through panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) |
same same same fixed! due to typesetting in that panel was redone same |
2-75 |
| [236] | 2-76 | ||
| [237] | panel 2: girls → girls' panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same same |
2-77 |
| [238] | panel 5: ellipsis changed to exclamation point | 2-78 | |
| [239] | title "endgames2" changed to "helplessnowinfailureending" | 2-79 | |
| [240] | panel 1: needs comma after "Nanasawa-san" panel 2: put Sight in italics, no quotes panel 7: (sigh...) → *sigh* |
same same same |
2-80 |
| [241] | 2-81 | ||
| [242] | panels 1, 4, 7: double hyphen should be a single dash (actually the ones in panels 1 and 4 would more properly be colons) |
same new error panel 6: proper syllable breaks are Si·a·mese |
2-129 |
| [243] | panel 7: girl's → girls' | same | 2-82 |
| [244] | 2-83 | ||
| [245] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panels 6 & 7: single quotes → double quotes |
same panel 6: comma moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside fixed! |
2-84 |
| [246] | panel 1: third sentence lacks brackets < > and a period | same | 2-155 |
| [247] | panel 8: single quotes → double quotes |
fixed! panel 8: ellipsis changed to period |
2-85 |
| [248] | panel 4: "that girl"? He knows her name. It still works okay, just struck me as odd. panel 6: no -san on Hayasaka? Is that okay since she's not around? He says Hayasaka-san in panel 1 though. panel 7: single quotes → double quotes Needs to switch pages with the next page |
same same fixed! same |
2-86 |
| [249] | panels 2 & 4: single quotes → double quotes panel 2: we we're → we're (or) we are panel 3: don't → doesn't panel 4: (sigh...) → *sigh* panel 7: (sniff...) → *sniff* Needs to switch places with the previous page |
fixed! same same same panel 4: ellipsis changed to period panel 5: ellipsis changed to period same same |
2-87 |
| [250] | panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asako) panel 5: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro) panel 7: two dot ellipsis and four dot ellipsis |
same same same |
2-88 |
| [251] | panel 8: ellipsis after question mark looks really off. I think either switch them around or remove the ellipses altogether. | same | 2-89 |
| [252] | panel 5: EDS → E.D.S. panel 6: commin &rarr comin' |
same panel 6: ellipsis changed to double hyphen but should be single dash same |
2-90 |
| [253] | 2-91 | ||
| [254] | panel 2: extra space in "er, uh," panel 4: no where → nowhere panel 4: extra period on Erika's sentence panel 7: put Copic in italics, no quotes |
fixed! same same fixed! panel 8: "wha.. wh" changed to "Wha...? Wh..." |
2-92 |
| [255] | panel 1: t3chniq3s → t3chniqu3s panel 3: extra space in "zombies and" |
same new error panel 1: added a -SWISH- but the original one is still half visible same panel 5: ellipsis changed to period |
2-93 |
| [256] | panel 5: "Miss Sugawara-san" I thought Yuki was the only one that doubled up on english/japanese honorifics like that, there's no reason for it here panel 7: two dot ellipsis panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) |
same same same |
2-94 |
| [257] | panel 3: double hyphen should be a single dash | same | 2-130 |
| [258] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asmodeus) panel 4: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asmodeus) panel 8: put Apple in italics, no quotes |
same fixed! same fixed! |
2-95 |
| [259] | panel 3: ellipsis changed to period | 2-96 | |
| [260] | 2-97 | ||
| [261] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Sugawara) panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Sugawara) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Sugawara) panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Miho) panel 9: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) |
same same same panel 4: ellipsis changed to period same panel 6: ellipsis changed to period same |
2-98 |
| [262] | panel 1: grey → gray |
same need to fix "gray" in comic title index also |
2-164 |
| [263] | panel 3: okay → OK (Yuki) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Erika) |
same same same |
2-99 |
| [264] | panel 1: lets → let's panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 2: extra space in "customers seemed" panel 4: extra space in "really down" panels 4 & 5 : single quotes → double quotes panel 7: (sigh...) → *sigh* panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 7: put Sapporo in italics |
same same same same fixed! same panel 7: ellipsis changed to period same fixed! |
2-100 |
| [265] | |||
| [266] | 2-139 | ||
| [267] | |||
| [268] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes |
fixed! panel 1: "post-it note" added |
2-157 |
| [269] | panel 1: put 3x3 Eyes, All Purpose Cultural Cat Girl Nuku Nuku, Blue Seed, and Every Day is Sunday in italics, no quotes panel 1: remove quotes from Pai and Yakumo panel 1: single quotes → double quotes for "Pai's Page - a 3x3 Eyes Homepage" and "Wu" |
same same fixed! |
2-158 |
| [270] | 2-159 | ||
| [271] | irrelevant text removed | 2-160 | |
| [272] | panel 1: lets → let's | same | 2-101 |
| [273] | panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) | same | 2-102 |
| [274] | panel 1: Monay → Monday panel 1: needs periods on the last sentences of the last two paragraphs |
same same |
2-161 |
| [275] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro, Largo) panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Largo, Piro) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 5: there's no space after the comma, needs second comma after second "my" |
same same same same same |
2-103 |
| [276] | panels 7 & 9 : single quotes → double quotes panel 9: lets → let's |
fixed! same |
2-104 |
| [277] | panels 6 & 7: Miho's internal monlouge isn't in brackets. Seems like maybe they should be, but I don't know |
same new error panel 6: her's → hers |
2-105 |
| [278] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same panels 4 & 5: text boxes changed to speech balloons same new error panel 6: fsking → fscking new error panel 6: ordinance → ordnance |
2-106 |
| [279] | panel 4: "omiket"? Should be Comiket?? |
new error panel 1: mpact → impact same |
2-131 |
| [280] | panel 2: put Sega and Sega CD in italics panel 3: panel 5: an real → a real panel 5: give's → gives |
panel 1: "Dom. Look," changed to "Dom, look." one fixed the other not changed to double hyphen but it should be a single dash fixed! same |
2-107 |
| [281] | shouldn't it be "endgamesstanding" rather than "endgamestanding"? | same | 2-169 |
| [282] | panels 1 & 3: put Sea of Illumination and Hikari no Umi in italics, no quotes panel 3: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same fixed! same same |
2-108 |
| [283] | panel 3: extra spaces (that means twice!) in "He tends to" | same | 2-109 |
| [284] | panel 1: four dot ellipsis panel 1: put Neverwinter Nights in italics panel 2: (sigh) → *sigh* panel 3: four dot ellipsis panel 4: comma or period needed after "here" |
same same panel 1: ellipsis changed to period same same same |
2-144 |
| [285] | panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Dom) | same | 2-110 |
| [286] | panel 2: is that a comma in the third ellipsis? panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) |
same same |
2-111 |
| [287] | 2-162 | ||
| [288] | panel 3: needs period on Largo's first sentence panel 5: does that cut-off bit in the middle of Largo's narration say "to get to close"? should that be "too close"? |
same same |
2-112 |
| [289] | panel 5: box changed to balloon | 2-113 | |
| [290] | panel 1: "post-it note" added, new error it's → its | 2-156 | |
| [291] | |||
| [292] | panel 1: "post-it notes" added, description of the drawing method should be in past tense now | 2-149 | |
| [293] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) panel 2: friends → friend's panel 4: somethin → somethin' panel 6: "Wh... whaitaminute" 'wait' with an H because he's drunk and slurring?? |
panel 1: ellipsis changed to period same same panels 3 & 5: font changed for hnnnhnhnn sound effects same same |
2-114 |
| [294] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Masamichi) panel 4: it's → its panel 4: Zombie language should not be in brackets. (compare with zombie appearances in Chap 10) panel 6: two dot ellipsis |
same panel 2: ellipsis changed to period same same fixed! whaddya changed to whad'ya change it back but maybe the syllable break should be whad-dya |
2-115 |
| [295] | panel 7: its → it's |
panel 3: ellipsis changed to period x2 panel 6: sound effect extended past panel line same |
2-116 |
| [296] | panel 7: single quotes → double quotes | fixed! | 2-117 |
| [297] | panel 1: put MegaTokyo in italics, no quotes panel 2: needs comma after "sub-standard strips" panel 6: single quotes → double quotes |
fixed! same fixed! |
2-145 |
| [298] | 2-118 | ||
| [299] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asmodeus) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asmodeus) |
panel 2: ellipsis changed to period same same |
2-119 |
| [300] | panel 1: mismatched quote marks on 'Flowerstomper" panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asmodeus) panel 2: single quotes → double quotes (x2) |
panel 1: "mm" given reduced font size same same one fixed, the other not |
2-120 |
| [301] | panel 1: double period after "heart" |
fixed panel 1: "chapter end" text changed |
2-121 |
| [302] | panel 7: final period should probably be inside the bracket | same | 2-132 |
| [303] | need to fix "gray" in comic title index | 2-165 | |
| [304] | 2-168 | ||
| [305] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) | same | 2-122 |
| [306] | panel 1: put MegaToyko in italics panel 6: ma'm → ma'am |
fixed! same |
2-123 |
| [307] | panel 1: big megatokyo logo updated | 3-9 | |
| [308] | panel 5: needs comma after "remember" panel 5: only one space between sentences (x2) (Yuki, Piro) |
same same panel 7: ellipses changed to periods |
3-10 |
| [309] | 3-175 | ||
| [310] | panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 3: remove comma after exclamation mark panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 6: should the third balloon have a tail for Erika? |
fixed! fixed! same panel 3: removed nested quotes in "Aren't not interested" same |
3-11 |
| [311] | panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 6: four dot ellipsis panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Miho) |
same same same panel 6: ellipsis changed to period |
3-12 |
| [312] | 3-13 | ||
| [313] | panel 1: remove period after "today?" panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Erika) panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Kimiko) panel 8: (Oof) → *Oof* |
same same same same |
3-14 |
| [314] | panel 4: extra space in "placed so" panel 6: needs period on Largo's sentence |
same same |
3-15 |
| [315] | |||
| [316] | panel 1: "post-it note" added new error needs to say "people who deal with kids". Although of course now you ARE one of them anyway. Maybe a new post-it should be added? | 3-176 | |
| [317] | panel 3: put Playstation in italics panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Miho) |
same same same |
3-16 |
| [318] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes panel 2: 50 caliber → .50 caliber |
fixed! panel 1: comma moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside same |
3-168 |
| [319] | panel 1: (sigh) → *sigh* panel 2: needs period on Ed's subtitle ("Yo.") panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Junpei) panel 8: Inconsistent number of exclamation points between Ed's balloon and his subtitle |
transparency on Ed's subtitle boxes removed same same same same |
3-17 |
| [320] | panel 1: its → it's panel 2: somethin → somethin' panel 3: needs period on first sentence |
same same same |
3-173 |
| [321] | panel 1: repetition of "Is l33t master here?" from the last panel of the previous page wrecks the flow in print. Consider cutting it and moving some dialouge from panel 2 into panel 1 panel 5: put Sega and Sony in italics panel 5: needs period on Ed's muffled sentence |
same same same transparency on Ed's subtitle boxes removed |
3-18 |
| [322] | |||
| [323] | |||
| [324] | |||
| [325] | 3-19 | ||
| [326] | |||
| [327] | 3-196 | ||
| [328] | panels 1, 2, 4, 5: put Clannad (x4), Shinobi (x4), Street Fighter in italics, no quotes | same | 3-171 |
| [329] | panel 7: remove period after "cannot" | same | 3-20 |
| [330] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Dom) panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 5: dammnit → dammit panel 8: needs period on Piro's sentence panel 8: extra space in "Ed, she's" |
same fixed! same panel 5: ellipsis replaced with double hyphen but should be a single dash same same |
3-21 |
| [331] | 3-22 | ||
| [332] | panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) | same | 3-23 |
| [333] | panel 3: missing closing bracket > panel 3: missing closing bracket > |
fixed! fixed! |
3-24 |
| [334] | panels 1 & 3: put Clannad and Sanrio in italics, no quotes | same | 3-25 |
| [335] | |||
| [336] | panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) | same | 3-26 |
| [337] | panel 1: thru → through panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 1: put Love Hina, Megatokyo, and Bioware in italics, no quotes panel 3: put Lord of the Rings in italics, no quotes (not sure why it's bolded either) panel 3: (sigh...) → *sigh* |
same same same same same |
3-177 |
| [338] | 3-27 | ||
| [339] | panel 2: single quotes → double quotes | fixed! | 3-28 |
| [340] | panel 5: single quotes → double quotes |
fixed! panel 5: hyphen changed to double hyphen but it should be a single dash new error panel 7: todays → today's |
3-29 |
| [341] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro, Erika) panel 7: single quotes → double quotes |
same fixed! |
3-30 |
| [342] | panel 1: needs period after "your entire body" panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same same |
3-31 |
| [343] | panel 2: proper syllable breaks are de·stroyed panel 6: single quotes → double quotes panel 6: needs comma after Great Teacher Largo |
same panel 4: the speech balloon on the far right from the student crowd is moved further towards the edge of the page, (new error) making it impossible to see fixed! fixed! but move it outside the quotes |
3-32 |
| [344] | put Super Moe-Moe Ball in italics, no quotes panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Miho) |
same same |
3-33 |
| [345] | panel 8: not sure the l337-ified "bouncing" makes sense. bo|_||\|5i|n = bounsiin ? should be more like bo|_||\|ci|\| | same | 3-34 |
| [346] | panel 1: added "lost wings" text | 3-206 / 207 | |
| [347] | panel 1: missing period in subtitle box | same | 3-35 |
| [348] | 3-36 | ||
| [349] | 3-37 | ||
| [350] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (student) panel 6: needs period on Largo's sentence panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Masamichi) |
same same same |
3-38 |
| [351] | panel 2: needs hyphen in Nanasawa-san panel 4: missing closing > bracket panel 4: needs period on Erika's last sentence panel 5: two dot ellipsis panels 2, 4, 5, 6: put Anna Miller's, Lockart, Sight, and Cubesoft in italics, no quotes |
same same fixed! same fixed except for quotes still on Sight in panel 4 |
3-39 |
| [352] | panel 1: "post-it note" added | 3-181 | |
| [353] | panel 2: put Cubesoft in italics | fixed! | 3-40 |
| [354] | panel 3: put Mortal Combat in italics, no quotes panel 6: only one space between sentences (x6) (Masamichi) |
fixed! same |
3-41 |
| [355] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes panel 6: put Anna Miller's in italics, no quotes |
fixed! panel 1: comma moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside fixed but that exclamation mark doesn't need to be italicized though |
3-42 |
| [356] | panel 1: put Anna Miller's in italics, no quotes panel 1: needs period on Kimiko's sentence panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
fixed! same same |
3-43 |
| [357] | panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Megumi) panel 5: put Anna in italics, no quotes panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Megumi) panel 6: needs comma after "please" |
same fixed! same same |
3-44 |
| [358] | panel 3: either a two dot ellipsis or an extra period, not sure which panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro) panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) |
same same same |
3-45 |
| [359] | panel 5: only one space between sentences (x2) (Masamichi) panel 5: change "50 ft." to "10 meter" or "10 m" |
same same |
3-46 |
| [360] | panel 3: hard to find rules on this but I think it's normally done with the ellipsis before the question mark panel 5: is Piro supposed to be switching to English there? panel 6: single quotes → double quotes |
same same fixed! |
3-47 |
| [361] | |||
| [362] | panel 8: nothin → nothin' | same | 3-48 |
| [363] | panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
panel 1: new font for Gameru same same |
3-49 |
| [364] | panel 5: single quotes → double quotes panel 5: change "ten-story" to "five-story" panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
fixed! same same panel 8: quote marks added in voiceover box should be removed again, it's not consistent with other pages |
3-50 |
| [365] | panel 1: grey → gray |
completely redrawn same need to fix "gray" in comic title index also |
3-208 |
| [366] | panel 1: extra space in "I'm sorry" | same | 3-51 |
| [367] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Junpei/answering machine) panel 3: art balloon tail to phone is different from what is used later (see [390],[511-513]) panel 4: damnit → dammit panel 6: needs comma after "Miho-san" |
same same same panel 6: quote marks added in 'voiceover' box (should be removed again, it's not consistent with other pages) same |
3-52 |
| [368] | panels 2 & 5: put Sonys and Sega Saturn in italics panel 5: needs comma after "Largo-sama" panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same same same |
3-53 |
| [369] | 3-54 | ||
| [370] | 3-209 | ||
| [371] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 3: put Cubesoft in italics |
same same |
3-55 |
| [372] | panel 6: remove comma after "A little late" | same | 3-56 |
| [373] | panel 1: Valentines → Valentine's panel 2: Howabout → How about panel 2: extra period after Sarah's last sentence panel 3 its → it's |
same same same same |
3-182 |
| [374] | 3-57 | ||
| [375] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 4: its → it's |
same fixed! |
3-58 |
| [376] | panel 1: extra space in "That the" | same | 3-59 |
| [377] | panel 4: why is there a comma in "fly me to the moon"? | same | 3-60 |
| [378] | 3-61 | ||
| [379] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x2) (Kimiko) | same | 3-62 |
| [380] | panel 3: EDS → E.D.S. | same | 3-63 |
| [381] | 3-64 | ||
| [382] | 3-65 | ||
| [383] | 3-197 | ||
| [384] | 3-66 | ||
| [385] | panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Erika) panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same |
3-67 |
| [386] | 3-68 | ||
| [387] | panel 2: extra period on Erika's sentence | same | 3-69 |
| [388] | |||
| [389] | panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) panel 7: goin → goin' |
same same |
3-70 |
| [390] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro) | same | 3-71 |
| [391] | |||
| [392] | 3-72 | ||
| [393] | panel 5: lets → let's | same | 3-73 |
| [394] | panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) | same | 3-74 |
| [395] | panel 1: but i feel → but I feel | same | 3-75 |
| [396] | 3-76 | ||
| [397] | panel 1: put Lockart in italics panel 6: "chapter end" text should be "End Chapter 3" |
same same |
3-77 |
| [398] | panel 2: put Megatokyo in italics | same | 3-185 |
| [399] | panel 2: shoppers → shopper's panels 3 & 5: put Prada and Louis Vuitton in italics |
same panels 3 to 6: music notes removed (why?) new error?? same |
3-78 |
| [400] | panel 2: addin → addin' panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 2: needs period on Largo's sentence (outside the quotes) panel 7: runnin → runnin' panel 8: goin → goin' |
same fixed! same same same |
3-186 |
| [401] | 3-210 | ||
| [402] | panels 1-3: sound fx redone panel 4: big megatokyo logo removed rather than updated, put the logo back |
3-79 | |
| [403] | panel 2: move period outside quotes panel 3: the period after Oaty O's isn't necessary panel 3 & 7: put Crunchy Oaty O's and Oaty O's in italics |
same same same |
3-80 |
| [404] | panel 5: extinquisher → extinguisher | same | 3-81 |
| [405] | 3-82 | ||
| [406] | panel 1: extra space in "that, yes" panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 3: put Lockart's and Anna Miller's in italics panel 4: question mark might be better as a period panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same same one fixed, the other not same same |
3-83 |
| [407] | panel 1: "post-it note" added though at this point what you wrote on there is no longer true | 3-198 | |
| [408] | panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) | same | 3-84 |
| [409] | panel 1: proper syllable breaks are com·pro·mised panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same |
3-85 |
| [410] | 3-199 | ||
| [411] | |||
| [412] | panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 5: art Miho's bell is missing |
same same |
3-86 |
| [413] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) | same | 3-87 |
| [414] | 3-88 | ||
| [415] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 2: missing closing bracket > panel 6: single quotes → double quotes panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same same fixed! same panel 8: new error page number is overlapping the panel line |
3-89 |
| [416] | panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seraphim) | same | 3-90 |
| [417] | 3-91 | ||
| [418] | 3-92 | ||
| [419] | 3-93 | ||
| [420] | panel 2: needs period on Dom's sentence | same | 3-94 |
| [421] | panel 1: extra space in "Girl Phase" panel 1: put Girl Phase in italics, no quotes panel 1: missing brackets panel 3: put Broken Bird in italics, no quotes panel 3: missing bracket panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Dom) panel 7: extra space in "warrior always" panels 4,5,7: Is there a reason Junpei is speaking English? Everyone else is speaking Japanese other than a single sentence of Dom's. The last panel seems especially odd. |
same same fixed! same fixed! same same same |
3-95 |
| [422] | 3-96 | ||
| [423] | panel 4: single quotes → double quotes |
one fixed, the other not panel 4: period moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside |
3-97 |
| [424] | panel 1: comma after "anytime" panel 2: only one space between sentences (x3) (Seraphim) |
same same |
3-178 |
| [425] | 3-98 | ||
| [426] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x2) (Ping) panel 4: periods should be commas in "We are, after all, here" |
same same |
3-99 |
| [427] | 3-100 | ||
| [428] | panel 4: put Endgames in italics, no quotes panel 4: single quotes → double quotes (emotional statistics) panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Miho) |
same fixed! panel 4: comma moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside same |
3-101 |
| [429] | 3-102 | ||
| [430] | panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (CEA clerk) panel 7: Lets → Let's |
same same |
3-103 |
| [431] | 3-211 | ||
| [432] | panel 2: extra space in "the complete" panel 2: put Endgames in italics, no quotes panel 4: single quotes → double quotes panel 5: single quotes → double quotes panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same same fixed! panel 4: period moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside fixed! same |
3-104 |
| [433] | 3-105 | ||
| [434] | panel 4: put Endgames in italics, no quotes panel 4: single quotes → double quotes (care) panel 6: single quotes → double quotes panel 6: needs period on Miho's last sentence (outside quotes) |
same fixed! new error panel 4: proper syllable breaks are sta·tis·ti·cal·ly same same |
3-106 |
| [435] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 5: needs period on Ping's sentence panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) |
same same same |
3-107 |
| [436] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asmodeus) panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 2: move question mark to outside quotes panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asmodeus) panel 3: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: proper syllable breaks are au·tho·ri·za·tion panel 5: single quotes → double quotes panel 6: single quotes → double quotes |
same fixed! same same fixed! same fixed! fixed! panel 6: quote marks added in 'voiceover' box should be removed again, it's not consistent with other pages, or panel 5 for that matter |
3-108 |
| [437] | 3-109 | ||
| [438] | |||
| [439] | 3-200 | ||
| [440] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: single quotes → double quotes |
panel 1: comma moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside fixed! fixed! |
3-169 |
| [441] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro) panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Miho) |
same same |
3-110 |
| [442] | panel 6: single quotes → double quotes |
fixed! panel 6: period moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside |
3-111 |
| [443] | panel 7: single quotes → double quotes |
fixed! panel 7: comma moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside |
3-112 |
| [444] | panel 2: thru → through panel 2: change "forty foot" to "fifteen meter" |
same same |
3-113 |
| [445] | panel 1: needs period on Largo's last sentence panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 3: single quotes → double quotes (x2) |
same same fixed! |
3-114 |
| [446] | 3-201 | ||
| [447] | 3-115 | ||
| [448] | panel 2: needs period on Piro's sentence (caption) panel 3: single quotes → double quotes panel 3: needs period on Piro's first sentence (caption) panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro/caption) |
same same same same |
3-180 |
| [449] | 3-116 | ||
| [450] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Asako) panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) |
same same |
3-117 |
| [451] | panel 5: put Playstation 2 and Emotional Doll System in italics, no quotes panel 8: only one space between sentences (x2) (Erika, Ping) |
same same |
3-118 |
| [452] | |||
| [453] | |||
| [454] | panel 4: extra space in "for an" panel 4: move period outside quotes panel 7: single quotes → double quotes |
same same panel 5: quote marks added in 'voiceover' box should be removed again, it's not consistent with other pages fixed! panel 7: period moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside |
3-119 |
| [455] | panel 1: "had left" is past perfect tense and doesn't really apply to the sentence. Largo himself may just be using poor grammar here, but "exactly as I left it" is the proper form panel 3: extra space in "I just" panel 5: only one space between sentences (x2) (fanboys) panel 5: remove space in "anime/game" |
same same same same |
3-120 |
| [456] | panels 3-4: This may be the only time in the entire comic that "thought bubbles" are used rather than boxes to show a 'voiceover', even with the 'thinking' character in panel (i.e. [445], [1121]). So, changing them to boxes would be best. |
same panel 5: quote marks added in 'voiceover' box should be removed again, it's not consistent with other pages |
3-121 |
| [457] | 3-122 | ||
| [458] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes panel 4: extra space in "language of" all panels: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) |
fixed! same panel 4: new font for Kobayashi's txts same |
3-123 |
| [459] | panel 5: remove colon after "Asmodeus" |
same panels 5-6: "whispering" bubbles changed to dashed lines |
3-124 |
| [460] | all panels: The text looks odd, the distance between letters is smaller, like the kerning got manually reduced. Needs to be redone. | 3-125 | |
| [461] | panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seraphim) |
same same |
3-126 |
| [462] | panel 6: Damnit → Dammit | same | 3-127 |
| [463] | panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panel 6: comma after "no" |
same same |
3-128 |
| [464] | all panels: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) |
all panels: new font for the txt messages same |
3-129 |
| [465] | panel 2: missing open bracket < panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) |
same same |
3-130 |
| [466] | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (fanboy) panel 6: single quotes → double quotes panel 6: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) |
same fixed! panel 6: new font for the txt messages same |
3-131 |
| [467] | panels 3 & 4: put Emotional Doll System in italics, no quotes panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) |
same same |
3-132 |
| [468] | panel 2: single quotes → double quotes | fixed! | 3-133 |
| [469] | panel 1: "post-it note" added | 3-202 | |
| [470] | panel 4: put Catalyst in italics, no quotes | same | 3-134 |
| [471] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seraphim) panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Seraphim) |
same same |
3-135 |
| [472] | panel 1: single quotes → double quotes | fixed! | 3-136 |
| [473] | panel 1: (snort.) → *snort* | same | 3-137 |
| [474] | 3-138 | ||
| [475] | panel 4: put Sight in italics, no quotes | same | 3-139 |
| [476] | 3-140 | ||
| [477] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Erika) panel 3: needs space after "So..." panel 4: put Lockart in italics panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 6: only one space between sentences (x2) (Kimiko, Erika) |
same same same same same |
3-141 |
| [478] | |||
| [479] | 3-142 | ||
| [480] | |||
| [481] | |||
| [482] | panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ed) | same | 3-143 |
| [483] | |||
| [484] | panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same |
3-144 |
| [485] | 3-145 | ||
| [486] | panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panels 2 & 7: art Piro's forehead cut missing |
same same |
3-146 |
| [487] | panel 2: single quotes → double quotes panel 3: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro) panels 2, 3 & 4: art Piro's forehead cut missing panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 7: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) |
fixed! same same same panel 7: new font for the txt messages same |
3-147 |
| [488] | panels 2, 4 & 6: art Piro's forehead cut missing | same | 3-148 |
| [489] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) | same | 3-149 |
| [490] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seraphim) | same | 3-150 |
| [491] | "post-it note" added | 3-203 | |
| [492] | panels 5 & 6: art Piro's forehead cut missing panel 6: double hyphen should be single dash panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panels 1 & 7: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) |
same same same same |
3-151 |
| [493] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seiya) panels 1 & 6: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) |
same same |
3-152 |
| [494] | |||
| [495] | 2-175 | ||
| [496] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seiya) panel 2: missing closing bracket > panel 5: proper syllable breaks are com·put·er panels 1 & 6: adjust txt msgs to match current format ([1050], etc) |
same same same same |
3-153 |
| [497] | panel 1: goin → goin' panel 2: double hyphen should be single dash panel 3: add a comma after "faceless" panel 5: art Piro's glasses are missing (okay, and the cut on his forehead, but he's far in the background so you probably couldn't see it anyway) panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seiya) panel 5: double hyphen should be single dash |
same same same same same same |
3-154 |
| [498] | text removed | 3-204 | |
| [499] | 3-155 | ||
| [500] | panel 2: needs period on Largo's last sentence panel 4: only one space between sentences (x2) (Piro) |
same same |
3-156 |
| [501] | panels 4 & 5: art Piro's forehead cut missing panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Seiya) |
same same |
3-157 |
| [502] | |||
| [503] | 3-158 | ||
| [504] | panel 5: put Girl Phase in italics, no quotes panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuuji) |
same same |
3-159 |
| [505] | panel 1: comma after "Good night" (Erika) and comma after "tomorrow" (Piro) panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Ping) panels 2 & 4: art Piro's forehead cut missing panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) |
same same same same |
3-160 |
| [506] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panel 5: missing close bracket > panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) panels 6: art Piro's forehead cut missing |
same same same same |
3-161 |
| [507] | panel 1: (sigh) → *sigh* | same | 3-162 |
| [508] | 3-205 | ||
| [509] | panels 3, 6: put Warner, Sears, and Atari in italics |
panels 1, 2, 7: italics addred on headers same panels 4 & 6: hyphen changed to double hyphen but it should be a single dash |
3-172 |
| [510] | |||
| [511] | 3-163 | ||
| [512] | panel 1: only one space between sentences (x1) (Miho) | same | 3-164 |
| [513] | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) | same | 3-165 |
| [514] | panel 2: shes → she's (x2) | same | 3-166 |
| [515] | panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (arrow box) |
panel 2: comma moved inside quotes but we decided to move it back outside same | 3-167 |
| [516] | panel 2: somethin → somethin' panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (Kimiko) panel 6: put Benelli in italics panel 9: I' → I panel 9: only one space between sentences (x1) (Dom) |
same same same same same |
3-187 |
| [517] | panel 1: comma after "enhancements" | same | 3-188 |
| [518] | panel 4: shootin → shootin' panel 4: only one space between sentences (x1) (Dom) panel 4: goddam → goddamn |
same same same |
3-189 |
| [519] | panel 3: fiance → fiancee or fiancée | same | 3-179 |
| [520] | 3-190 | ||
| [521] | panel 1: years → year's |
same panel 1: "post-it note" added |
3-183 |
| [522] | panel 9: only one space between sentences (x1) (Yuki) | same | 3-191 |
| [523] | 3-192 | ||
| [524] | panel 3: (Grunt) → *Grunt* panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (footnote) panel 6: its → it's panel 8: only one space between sentences (x1) (Piro) |
same same same same |
3-193 |
| [525] | panel 5: "Where's" → "Where are" or "Where're" | same | 3-194 |
book non-comic errors
| Book errors, typos, etc. | Book # - page # |
||
| (dedication) double hyphen should be single dash who's → whose |
1-4 | ||
| ¶1 (forward) "New to this volume is a new section" redundant "new" ¶3 it's → its ¶5 Webcomics → webcomics |
1-6 | ||
| ¶1 it's → its | 1-7 | ||
| ¶2 "MT,Casual"?? needs a space, and either a period or a lowercase C | 1-8 | ||
| (SGD intro) | double hyphen should be single dash | 1-98 | |
| (SGD section end) | single quotes → double quotes x2 | 1-105 | |
| (Piro's Sketchbook) | move period outside quotes on "Art Police" | 1-140 | |
| (Piro's Sketchbook) | double hyphen should be single dash | 1-144 | |
| (Piro's Sketchbook) | who's → whose | 1-147 | |
| (Piro's Sketchbook) | al → all | 1-150 | |
| (Piro's Sketchbook) | double hyphen should be single dash | 1-156 | |
| (dedication) double hyphen should be single dash | 2-4 | ||
| ¶5 it's → its ¶7 no period on the last sentence |
2-6 | ||
| ¶2 lowercase i | 2-148 | ||
| (Endgames) | ¶1 "Aye, This" → "Aye, this" ¶2 point → pointing ¶3 "gods of Ale" → "gods of ale" ¶6 "this bilge," → "this bilge." |
2-171 | |
| (Endgames) | ¶6 "consumption of ale" → "consumption of ale," ¶8 "against the wall" → "against the wall," or "against the wall and" |
2-172 | |
| (Endgames) | ¶2 "those trees" → "Those trees" | 2-173 | |
| (Endgames) | ¶5 thru → through | 2-175 | |
| (Endgames) | ¶5 Largos → Largo's | 2-178 | |
| (Endgames) | ¶2 needs space after ellipsis | 2-179 | |
| (Endgames) | ¶6 thru → through | 2-180 | |
| ¶5 it's → its ¶6 needs period on last sentence |
3-6 | ||
| ¶7 roomate → roommate | 3-7 | ||
| ¶1 it's → its (x2) | 3-184 | ||
| (Endgames) | panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (Largo) | 3-214 | |
| (Endgames) | panel 4: (sigh) → *sigh* panel 4: extra space in "You sigheth" panel 5: can'na → canna (sources are divided between canna and cannae, but for sure there's no apostrophe) panel 7: Fogoureth → Fougoureth |
3-215 | |
| (Endgames) | panel 1: Fogoureth → Fougoureth panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (injured guy) panel 5: only one space between sentences (x1) (injured guy) panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (injured guy) panel 9: only one space between sentences (x1) (m0h pawn) |
3-216 | |
| (Endgames) | panel 2: only one space between sentences (x1) (Pirogoeth) panel 7: only one space between sentences (x1) (m0h pawn) panel 7: extra space in "can I" |
3-217 | |
| (Endgames) | panel 2: I'm not liking the apostrope on 'ta. It's an accent for "to" so no removed letter is represented by the apostrophe. panel 6: similarly the 't would make more sense as t' panel 7: also 'o → o' and 'ta → ta again. 'r for are is okay I suppose, 'r' would look worse |
3-218 | |
| (Endgames) | panel 3: double hyphen should be single dash panel 6: only one space between sentences (x1) (m0h pawn) panel 6: double hyphen should be single dash |
3-219 | |
| (Endgames) | panel 2: double hyphen should be single dash panel 3: only one space between sentences (x1) (m0h pawn) |
3-220 |
Notes:
Consistency issues (need to make decisions then I can generate lists of places that need fixing)
Consistency issues in progress (need to insert these into the list yet)
Resolved Consistency issues (I have inserted these corrections into the list)
Proper Noun/trademarks/titles handling list (first three books only):
Single Quotes
[16] Excel Saga
[122] The Mummy Returns
[337] Bioware
Double Quotes
[12] With You Mitsumeteitai, Neverwinter Nights
[22] Air
[36] Dead or Alive Hardcore
[50] Duke Nukem Forever
[52] Napple Tale
[66] Neverwinter Nights
[77] Temptation Island
[96] Daikatana
[172] Dance Dance Revolution
[200] Baldur's Gate, Neverwinter Nights, Shattered Steel 2
[221] Emotional Doll System
[240] Sight
[334] Clannad
[337] Love Hina, MegaTokyo, Lord of the Rings
[504] Girl Phase
[524] Last Regrets (song)
Single Quotes changed to Double Quotes in print
[13] Nadesico
[16] Air
[20] Metal Gear Solid 2, Solid Snake, MacGyver (→ no italics or quotes for characters)
[28] Denny's
[30] Daily Radar
[106] Princess Maker
[122] Office Space
[148] Blair Witch
[178] Warmth>br>
[205] Death Star (→ quotes okay for this one)
[269] a bunch of things
[282] Sea of Illumination/Hikari no Umi
[344] Super Moe Moe Ball
[421] Broken Bird
[434] Endgames
[451] Emotional Doll System
[467] Emotional Doll System
[475] Sight
Double Quotes added in print
[149] Miami Vice
[328] Clannad, Shinobi, Street Fighter
Italics
-
Italics added in print
[2] Sega, Neverquest
[3] Sega
[4] Bioware
[6] Ionstorm
[15] AMD Athlon
[17] Marvel Vs. Capcom 2, Capcom Vs. SNK
[20] Konami
[21] Sentimental Graffiti 2 Special
[25] Pia Carrot 2.5 Super DX, SNK
[28] Anna Miller's
[33] Playstation 2
[40] Sega
[44] Magical Stuffed Kami-chan
[50] 3D Realms
[52] Candyland
[66] Bioware
[92] MegaGamers
[106] Emotional Doll System
[112] NHL 2K
[121] Bioware
[125] Cubesoft
[194] Megatokyo
[200] Bioware
[205] Bloom County
[220] Trollfilter 9000
[264] Sapporo
[280] Sega
[306] Megatokyo
[351] Lockart, Cubesoft
[353] Cubesoft
[406] Anna Miller's
Quotes changed to Italics in print
[178] Megatokyo
[224] Kanon
[230] Kanon
[254] Copic
[258] Apple
[297] MegaTokyo
[351] Anna Miller's
[354] Mortal Combat
[355] Anna Miller's
[356] Anna Miller's
[357] Anna Miller's
Single Quotes changed to Double Quotes with Italics in print
[351] Sight
[421] Girl Phase
[428] Endgames
[432] Endgames
[470] Catalyst
Nothing
[12] Baldur's Gate 2
[15] Athlon
[113] Cave of Evil
[131] Guinness
[151] Quake
[181] Cubesoft
[206] Toshiba, Tiger, Hello Kitty
[213] Neverwinter Nights
[280] Sega CD
[284] Neverwinter Nights
[317] Playstation
[321] Sega [Black Ops], Sony [Enforcement Division]
[334] Sanrio
[368] Sony, Sega Saturn
[371] Cubesoft
[397] Lockart
[398] Megatokyo
[399] Prada, Louis Vuitton
[403] Oaty O's
[406] Lockart
[477] Lockart
[516] Benelli
(various) PS2
overall Quotes vs. Italics: 39 to 41
Quotes: movie/show: 8 ; game: 15 ; character: 1 ; restaurant/store: 2 ; other: 3
Italics: company: 9 ; game: 9 ; character: 1 ; restaurant/store: 2 ; other: 5
Things handled not always the same way: Baldur's Gate, Sight, Endgames, Cubesoft, Lockart, Athlon
book 4: 18/"Girl Phase" 31/Gamestop 42/"Killtrunk" 60/"Sight" 90/H&K Socom 90/Sega 97/"Dead or Alive Ultimate Fear" 115/Cave of Evil 134/"Happy Veggie" 146/Cave of Evil 147/Playstation 148/"Cave"
book 5: 67/"Sight" 117/Harvest Moon: Dust Bowl
book 6: 7/Toranoana 53/"Sight" 55/"Sight" 92/"Sight" 177/MegaGamers 202/"Endgames"
